I pursed my lips at the sight of the proud man standing before me,
A sick grin crossed his face as he began loosening his black tie,
He walked toward me and said, "Don't worry I'll take it nice and easy,"
By the look of the seductive red dress you'd think I wasn't too shy,
But pain churned inside my stomach as he touched my hot red cheek,
I closed my eyes tightly imagining someone who loved my aching heart,
Slowly I turned hard after that night, claiming money and looking chic,
You may just see me as a stupid whore, but I'm pretty damn smart!
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I like the ending, but an exclamation mark doesn't feel quite right to the atmosphere. =/
Still, it's pretty cool how you've described it.
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This is....odd. Not in a bad way.
It's just...like I'm not sure WHAT to think of it since it's so terrible but you portray it quite realistically somehow.
Gah, it's hard to explain.
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now they drag me off in pieces." - elle-sophicles
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"I will make pilgrims of my fingers,"
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There is only one place you can go to avoid God.
Hell.
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There is only one place you can go to avoid God.
Hell.
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Blood and ink stain the walls silently with bloodied knuckles
I carry on hoping it’s not too wrong
Honey it’s just the start of it.
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There is only one place you can go to avoid God.
Hell.
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Blood and ink stain the walls silently with bloodied knuckles
I carry on hoping it’s not too wrong
Honey it’s just the start of it.
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